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About Lynda McDaniel, Writing Coach


I spent more than 25 years writing for corporations and major magazines and newspapers. Now as a writing coach, I realize how many techniques journalist have in their toolkit that can make a huge difference for business writers. You'll find an introduction to many of those tips and tools in my blogs. I hope you'll give them a try. They'll make your writing more effective—and more profitable! Just let me know if you any have questions.

Best of luck!
Lynda McDaniel
Writing coach
director@afcbw.com

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Business Writing and Writer’s Block

Monday, March 26th, 2012

“How do you overcome writer’s block?”

As a business writing coach, I hear that question a lot. My longtime colleague Virginia McCullough and I recently delivered a webinar about kick-starting the book-writing process, and, not surprisingly, many participants asked about writer’s block. Writing a book is a big project, and that means more time for your fear gremlins to attack.

That’s right—fear gremlins that creep in and steal your enthusiasm and confidence. As Virginia puts it: “Writer’s block is a scary thing … but we believe that what is usually referred to as writer’s block is actually fear that leads to procrastination. Many people think writer’s block comes to them, as if it were a disease. But it’s a combination of self-doubt and fear that leads to procrastination. Our creativity isn’t blocked.”

Especially with our nonfiction writing (not just books but articles, blogs, proposals—all kinds of business writing), Virginia and I have found that we have to write through any concerns and problems. Deadlines loom—and our incomes depend on turning in assignments on time. Maybe we have to research more information or interview someone to get back on track. Maybe we take a few extra breaks and quietly listen for insights our brains have been working on (more on that in future blogs). But we keep writing.

Not to be glib, but the best antidote to writer’s block is to write. Don’t worry about syntax, word choices, or typos. Just let it rip. There. It’s done, that awful first draft or next chapter. As you wrote with abandon, your writer’s block disappeared. So what if your draft is lousy? Guess what? You’re in good company—writers you love to read write terrible first drafts.

I struggled with this early in my career. I thought if I wrote bad first drafts, I was a bad writer. Then I read Bird by Bird by Anne Lamott. All those years of agonizing over my embarrassingly bad first drafts, and in an instant I was cured. What I learned from Anne is that just about everyone writes terrible first drafts! Anne gave me permission to let myself go. Now, I let the words come any way they want (which is a real boost to creativity too).

So, let me be your Anne Lamott. It’s okay to write dreadful first drafts. All you have to do is write and write. Just get your ideas down. You can always go back two, five, ten times and make it better each time. In fact, don’t think of your first draft as writing—it’s more about planning and organizing. Capture that jumble of thoughts, and in the process, you’ll give writer’s block the heave-ho.

To learn more about the book-writing webinars and retreats Virginia and I have planned, just write me at director@afcbw.com. We’ve joined forces for an exciting new enterprise entitled The Book Catalysts. We’ll soon launch a series of on-demand and live book-writing webinars, coaching packages, and writing retreats (both virtual and on-site).

How do you overcome writer’s block? What tips can you share about overcoming fear and procrastination?

 

Business Writing: Who Cares?

Monday, February 27th, 2012

This winter, sunny California has lived up to its name, which means spring fever arrived early. After a recent business-writing meeting, I couldn’t resist strolling Oakland’s College Avenue to check out the colorful shops. In one of my favorites, I got a good laugh from a pack of sticky notes featuring a woman holding up a file folder with the headline: “File under ‘Who cares?’”

On the way home, though, I wasn’t laughing when I thought about how fat that file would be today. About 80 percent of all business writing could be filed under that category.

What a waste of time, effort, and most of all, potential.


Time:
Even 10 minutes spent on writing filed under “Who cares?” is a waste for the writer and the reader.

Effort: I’m sure that most of the people turning out “Who cares?” documents want their business writing to be more effective, but they honestly don’t know how. They’re already discouraged by their results, and their motivation takes another hit with every “Who cares?” reaction.

Potential: Here’s the real kicker—lost sales, missed opportunities, and flagging spirits. They all happen when our business writing doesn’t generate the interest it should.

OK, so what’s the antidote? What can you do to make your readers care? Try the one-two punch:

1. Write to them not at them.

-   Share stories, benefits, and results through your readers’ eyes. What do they care about? Use that as your focus rather than what you want to tell them. You’ll still get your points across—but they’ll be framed from your readers’ perspective.

-   Engage them. Use the word “you” often. It’s a proven magnet that keeps people reading.

2. Get [a little] creative.

I added that “little” qualifier because people freeze at the word “creative.” Don’t. There are so many easy ways to be more creative. And besides, since most people are slapping together their business writing, you can stand out with just a few creative touches. (Don’t worry about these in your early drafts. Add them in your editing phase.)

Here are four easy ways to be more creative:

Paint pictures with similes: Introduce new ideas in your business writing by comparing them to something familiar; use like and as to connect the new with the familiar. For example: Our services are like an a la carte menu—you get to choose exactly what you want.  Or: Lumping our software packages into one category is like saying pasta is just spaghetti. Your readers will be on your wavelength in a fraction of the time.

Add a lyrical lilt with alliteration: The repetition of initial consonant sounds in two or more neighboring words or syllables (“Paint pictures” and “lyrical lilt with alliteration”). The effect is engaging and memorable, which makes your message stand out.

Create mystery with foreshadowing: Mention a point early on but save the explanation until later. You’ll create drama and tension by withholding key information—which keeps your readers reading.

Incorporate dialogue: Introduce other voices into your article and have them talk to one another. Dialogue also makes the page look less dense—and more appealing to your readers’ eye.

When you give these creative techniques a try, your articles and blogs, reports and proposals will be filed under “Important Ideas!”

What creative techniques do you use to add interest to your business writing? What successes have you had that you can attribute to a well-crafted proposal, report, blog—even e-mail?

How to Write a Successful Business Book

Wednesday, March 9th, 2011
Yes

A friend recently recommended a book. A research report, he added.

“Ugh!” I thought, recalling other research books I’d read.

But I can’t put this one down. Here’s why:

It’s creatively written. No dry language, no jargon, no “researchese.” Just great stories, case studies, similes, and quotes that relate to the readers’ best interest. (All the things I teach and preach about creative business writing.)

Yes! 50 Scientifically Proven Ways to Be Persuasiveby Noah J. Goldstein, Steve J. Martin, and Robert B. Cialdini illustrates how “small changes in the way that requests are made can often lead to some startlingly big results.” (Page 150.)

And they live up to that mission on every page of their bestseller.

Want to make your business book, blogs, and articles just as compelling?  Let’s deconstruct it, that is, examine their techniques so you can use them in your business writing. In other words, emulate to write great. (More on rhyming in a minute.)

Here are just a few ways the authors made their research compelling:

1. Stories: Yes! shares fascinating tales and case studies that grab your attention and make their message stick. Think about your own stories and how you can use them to engage and inform.

2. Famous quotes: Yes! includes memorable messages from Luke Skywalker, Oscar Wilde, and Benjamin Franklin, among others. Who can you quote to add information and inspiration?

3. Clever wordplay: Yes! ends a chapter with, “The brittle foundation of the relationship may crack, and the cooperative bridge you’ve built up may come crashing down.” (Page 59.) Play with your words to say something more creatively. The above sentence could have read, “The foundation may crack and ruin your relationship,” but the authors took time to write a more creative—and memorable—analogy. Give it a try next time you write a proposal or article.

4. Rhyming: Yes! explains that rhyming offers greater “processing fluency.” In other words, our brains process rhyming phrases more easily than non-rhyming phrases. To make your message more memorable, take the time to rhyme.

If this book had been dry, word of mouth would have died on our parched lips. Same goes with boring business letters, reports, blogs, articles, proposals—even e-mail. They just don’t get the job done anymore. Give these techniques a try. Engage and inspire so you can set your business results on fire.